I just wrote this is it okay it isnot graded but is it interesting We were at school, it was break and a group of us were in an empty classroom.

We decided to play a game called 7 minutes in heaven. My crush was there and he was staring at me with lustful eyes. I noticed him and I smiled back. It was his turn and the bottle landed right at me. "Oh my god," I thought to myself ,he smiled and said ,"i choose you!". The others were wooing us and I could feel my heart my heart racing with excitement. As we entered, we held hand and he shut the door. He stared at me I also stared at him, to be honest it was getting boring and very hot inside. It was nothing like the storied I've read and was disappointed he didn't want to kiss me.

Then he suddenly asked me this question "do you like me ?". I stared at him shocked he asked but I nodded shyly. Then he suddenly grabbed me by my shoulders and held me against the wall inside of the closet. He looked at me with those dreamy eyes of his, and smiled mischievously. He then started to kiss my thighs slowly and I thought to myself what if the other heard us. HE looked up and stared at my lips and we kissed, I felt his hand slide under my skirt and into my underwear and his finger went into me. IT was awesome , he sucked my tongue and I wrapped my hand around him and moaned. HIS hand grabbed my legs and I wrapped my legs around him like a squid.

is this alright also i am 13 do i have talent

Is my mailman likes to read peoples mail. all mailmen like to read peoples mail an example for hasty generalization

Using apostrophes, hyphens, dashes, brackets, and parentheses correctly correct each error in the use of apostrophes, hyphens, dashes, brackets, and parentheses in the following sentences. you may need to add, delete, or change marks of punctuation. doesnt this turkey look oh, no, the cat must have gotten up on the counter!

Read the sentences below and complete the instruction that follows. the coach, who has ten years' experience, has agreed to lead our team. the coach who has ten years' experience has agreed to lead our team. select the answer that explains the difference between the two sentences, as well as the purpose each clause serves for the benefit of the reader. a.) the first sentence contains a noun clause that functions as a predicate nominative; therefore, it renames the subject of the sentence for the reader. the second sentence contains an essential adjective clause that modifies the noun "coach"; therefore, it clarifies for the reader which coach is being discussed. b.) the first sentence contains a nonessential adjective clause that modifies the noun "coach"; therefore, it provides the reader with interesting details about the subject of the sentence. the second sentence contains an essential adjective clause that modifies the noun "coach"; therefore, it clarifies for the reader which coach is being discussed. c.) the first sentence contains a nonessential adjective clause that modifies the noun "coach"; therefore, it provides the reader with interesting details about the subject of the sentence. the second sentence contains a noun clause that functions as a predicate nominative; therefore, it renames the subject of the sentence for the reader. d.) the first sentence contains an adverb clause that modifies the verb "agreed"; therefore, it provides the reader with the answer to the question "when." the second sentence contains an essential adjective clause that modifies the noun "coach"; therefore, it clarifies for the reader which coach is being discussed.