I need help writing a poem about identity for language this is what I have so far I remember a time when I was a free little girl
I had no worries and felt happy
But then school came and with it the worries
the insecurities
the doubt
the pressure to succeed
before I knew it the happiness was gone
I remember never caring how I looked before
But as I got older that's what life was all about
I thought
are my thighs too fat?
Am I too short?
Is my butt big enough?
Should I wear more makeup?
But then my thoughts changed
soon they were all about HER
would I look better if i wore the same clothes as her?
would people like me more if I talked like her?
or maybe if I walked like her?
if only I WAS her

Can you please revise my poem and add stylistic elements to it and tell me what stylistic elements you used please.