I am writing a 150 word summary for a non-research essay i did. It was about bullying of obese kids. It talks about how bullying can affect obese kids. This is the summary i have already wrote. i was told that don't use backs up. Use words such as support(s), confirm(s), is in agreement with. Do a thesaurus for support and see if there are other words that fit. Can someone help me rewrite this summary as long as it is 150 words please. Below is the summary i wrote already. Only right answer people please Iyonna Thompson give good insight to bullying of the obese kids. This backs up my argument essay by providing quotes on how obese kids and adults get bullied. Paragraph 1 backs up the first point in my argument essay. “Studies have documented that children who are overweight or obese are bullied, teased and socially excluded by their peers”. This shows that children being bullied are called names can lead to overweight and obese in the future. The next part of this article that backs up my thesis statement is in paragraph 5. The article states “studies consistently found that chronically bullied children were significantly more likely to be overweight in adolescence or in adulthood than non-bullied children. The article also states “young people who were obese at age four were found to have over 50% increased risk of being bullied in school at age six”. The last point that backs up my thesis statement is that being bullied makes obese people isolate from social activities. The article states also that “Specifically, overweight children who are teased, excluded from social activities or bullied in other ways can experience weight gain into adulthood”.

answer: could you give the examples?

explanation:

there on the beach was a struggling turtle.   around its bright green neck was a loop of soda can rings.   in order to the planet, i have made a few changes to my life.   the first change is reducing the number of straws used. the second change was to recycle.   finally, i have worked hard to clean up litter.   it is important to clean our ocean.

you may not think straws have a large impact but they do.   imagine for every straw you sip out of a poor, , adorable turtle is being harmed.   one way i chipped in to is by using metal straws.   these straws are reusable and inexpensive.   another change is simply turning down straws.   by refusing a straw, i’m the turtles one drink at a time.  

however, the ocean just doesn't have turtles.   there are lots of creatures that live there and are harmed by all the litter.   to prevent litter from growing it’s important to recycle.   for me, i have started to buy most goods that are made out of recycled material.   pura vidas, chacos, purses, and too many other items to even count.   plus, when you buy those products they give money to charities.   not only am i the environment, but i’m also feeling better about my self.   finally, i have worked hard to clean up litter.   it is important to clean our ocean.

explanation:

the rhetorical devices that he used in "common sense" are syntax for his sentence structure and pathos for his emotion against the british unfairly treating the "americans" and logos of what documents that what happened to the pilgrims when they had the mayflower compact and how that the british were wanting to have one religion but the compact said for any religion to be accepted.

i think the answer is d)solicitude sorry if the answer is wrong.