Write a brief paragraph explaining what is wrong with the following outline of one point of a speech. Include at least three separate reasons. I. Things citizens are concerned about in our city a. Crime is a concern 1. Gangs b. Traffic is a concern 1. During commuter time 2. Lack of parking c. Pollution is a concern i. from buses

what is the question that you are asking

try to do soaps tone.

s-subject

o-occasion (the reason the author wrote the poem)

a-audience (who is this poem mostly for)

p-purpose (was it to convince, inspire, etc. the audience)

s-speaker (can be the author or another character, like is a child, adult, woman, elderly, animal narrating the poem)

tone- the mood the reader gets from this poem

mood- the mood the author had with their own poem

meaning- what do you think the meaning is?

message- what is the author trying to explain to the audience? like what is the theme?

if you still don't get it try showing everyone the poem so they could unravel it

sorry, idk never read it

i dont understand the question you are asking