I need help reviewing this English 2 Essay What is the topic of your paper?
perseverance

Where are you in the writing process?
I think I'm on track but ready for feedback
- So we started out on a prewriting Graphic organizer which was putting together cites and explanations from articles that we read previously. We then moved on to online. This is the rough draft before we do the editing and then finally the final paper. we need to make sure that there are transitions and background information that it will go smoothly and for it not to be choppy. the teacher is very picky and wants it to go smoothly and not to be choppy. That is probably the number one thing should we look at. also in English essays, it's very important to have the right grammar and punctuation. The essay must be 5 paragraphs no more no less
- Could you review my essay for higher-order concerns (thesis, organization, and paragraph development) and Grammar, punctuation, Making sure there are transitions and background information so the essay is smooth and NOT choppy

Which text evidence from the passage supports the theme that even nonliving things contain a life force? select two options.it was close and dry and dusty in the house of the gods.” “i have said the magic was gone but that is not true—it had gone from the magic things but it had not gone from the place.” “i felt the spirits about me, weighing upon me.” “nor had i ever slept in a dead place before—and yet, tonight, i must sleep there.” “when i thought of it, my tongue felt dry in my throat, in spite of my wish for knowledge.” “almost i would have gone down again and faced the dogs, but i did not.”

Where do i find advocacy articles for 2.04 english 4? this is for the first amendment.

Read the rough draft of a student's conclusion to anargumentative editorial.(1) year-round schooling would student achievement.(2) not so much information would have to be crammed intonine months. (3) furthermore, the elimination of long breaks,particularly summer break, would significantly reduce"learning loss" and the additional time wasted at thebeginning of each academic year to reteach previouslylearned material. (4) it is clear that year-round schooling students learn and retain more. (5) the united staleis not the only country to experiment with a year-roundschool schedule. (6) although many still claim that evidenceabout year-round school and its link to higher achievement isinconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and seethat students in these schools consistently score higher oncertain assessments than students who attend schools withtraditional nine-month calendars. (7) it is about time that wereplaced our outdated and inefficient school calendars.which best revises sentence 6 to create a more appropriate and respectful tone