Hey guys so my assignment was to create a character and write a character analysis. My character is named Brian. Please just read over my essay and tell me what you think about it so far the criteria is on the bottom! I’m not sure what to write for the internal and external conflict if you could also tell me how to write it that would be cool!

Explanation:

Hmmm, spots on vivid descriptions. You're super talented at identifying and analysing qualities.

You might consider using connectives such as Also, Furthermore, In addition and so on, in place of Brian repeatedly stated.

For illustration, you could include an image of Brian.

When it comes to internal and external conflict, maybe a misunderstanding between Brian and another character e.g Mike, which leads to a feeling of hatred brewing up between them, disruptions in their social lives and so on but they later find a resolution.

Other than that, I love it, I can literally view Brian in reality. You basically brought him to life through the power of words and your imagination. A+++