Hey does this sound right? please help me. Here in Nassau, Bahamas there was a violent hurricane. Roaring thunder, trees moving ruthlessly, Lightning danced across the sky. Our entire family began to be terrified because there was a coconut tree right in front of our home. The tree could’ve fallen onto our house causing drastic damage. With this dangerous weather, things begin to fall inside our house. Our rooftop in the kitchen begins to tear apart, causing everyone to be petrified. This hurricane felt like it was the end of the world.
As we sat here in fear, suddenly we heard a BANG!! In the living room everyone rush to see what it was, we saw a humongous coconut tree. Suddenly water came dashing through our front door and the wind blowing heavily which caused water to enter our home, so we quickly evacuated with so much water on the ground I slipped on the floor causing my patella to dislocate.
The pain I was in was unexplainable. There won’t be any doctor for now only God. My dad helped me to exit the back kitchen door, so we could go onto safer grounds which was our neighbor’s house. As I sat on the bed my dad placed an icepack on the swollen area of my patella and I also took a pill to ease my pain then fell asleep. After hours passed of lighting, rain, strong breeze blowing the storm finally calm down. Because of the this very deadly rain our house was destroyed, so we move to Miami, Florida to live with my aunts and cousins.

Read the following short excerpt of student writing. use your vocabulary and grammar knowledge to determine which suggestions you would make to improve his or her grammar and word choice. i really thought she loved me but i discovered her grave betrayal one afternoon. it was easy to figure out because she accidentally sent a text to me that was meant for him. i was confused by the text because it said, "don't tell mike." i felt insulted that she thought she could get away with this infidelity. at first i felt very angry bitter and hateful but then i felt so hopeless and depressed. i longed for her to call me. i thought if i could just hear her pleasing voice, maybe then i would not be filled with such bitterness. instead of calling her i talked to another friend who is good at listening and feeling my pain. talking with her makes me feel euphoric. i think i may be on the road to recovery.what word would you suggest to replace the underlined word or words in this excerpt? instead of calling her, i talked to another friend who is (good at listening and feeling my pain). talking with her makes me feel euphoric. amorous sentimental empathetic grave

Asap plz which sentence from this excerpt of jefferson davis’s inaugural address indicates that secession was the confederacy’s way of reclaiming its legal powers? an agricultural people, whose chief interest is the export of a commodity required in every manufacturing country, our true policy is peace, and the freest trade which our necessities will permit . . there can be but little rivalry between ours and any manufacturing or navigating community, such as the northeastern states of the american union. it must follow, therefore, that a mutual interest would invite good will and kind offices. if, however, passion or the lust of dominion should cloud the judgment or inflame the ambition of those states, we must prepare to meet the emergency and to maintain, by the final arbitrament of the sword, the position which we have assumed among the nations of the earth. we have entered upon the career of independence, and it must be inflexibly pursued. through many years of controversy with our late associates, the northern states, we have vainly endeavored to secure tranquillity, and to obtain respect for the rights to which we were entitled. as a necessity, not a choice, we have resorted to the remedy of separation; and henceforth our energies must be directed to the conduct of our own affairs, and the perpetuity of the confederacy which we have formed. if a just perception of mutual interest shall permit us peaceably to pursue our separate political career, my most earnest desire will have been fulfilled. but, if this be denied to us, and the integrity of our territory and jurisdiction be assailed, it will but remain for us, with firm resolve, to appeal to arms and invoke the blessings of providence on a just cause . .

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