Open the Notebook tool (G) and copy and paste the response you wrote earlier. Revise your writing to include an introductory phrase that transitions into the text evidence. Think about which introductory phrases would work best
for your specific examples.

The text reveals that the narrator has formed a strong bond with the family she works for. In the line, "but after these two years I've wedged my way into their hearts" shows two things. First, the phase "wedged my way" shows that the narrator has made a strong
effort to be in relationship with the family. Second, the phase "into their hearts" shows that the family has accpeted her as one of the family. Thus, we can infer that the narrator has created a strong bond.

4. at the conclusion of frankenstein, robert walton has an encounter with the monster, who arrives after victor frankenstein has died. perhaps surprisingly, the monster mourns his creator and expresses remorse over the fate that victor suffered. the monster pledges to destroy himself and then departs, disappearing as he goes further north. how does the monster’s behavior and attitude in this part of the novel affect the way readers view him? is he sympathetic? is he more hateful because it is only after victor has died that he relents? how does the change in the monster fit with the theme of duality in the novel?

Part a which statement best describes a central idea in this narrative? in times of tragedy, it is difficult to determine how best to be of service. in times of crisis, people prefer to be alone. young people tend to look to older people to take action in times of tragedy. when people publicly commit to being of service, they are more likely to follow through. part b which detail from the text best to shape the central idea in part a? "'i thought you might have too much going on already. i saw everyone post online.' martin said, 'i don’t think anyone wanted to be in the way today, so i’m glad you came.'" "finally, he said, 'i don’t know what to do. i guess i should tell him to let me know if he needs anything, but that doesn’t feel like enough.'" "he wondered how many people would actually show up to out and how many would simply hope that enough others did." "he explained to her that martin’s mom had died, and told her how he felt about his friend’s loss. 'what do you plan to do for him? ' his mother asked."

Write one paragraph that evaluates the effectiveness of jack zipes’s essay.