Narrative writing An Unexpected Visitor

The Unexpected Visitor It was a rainy night. The dark clouds blocked the moon light from hitting the ground. Down on Earth, the Evergreens and other plants and trees shook violently in the wind. The rain water from above crashed onto them violently. The ground was covered with leaves and broken branches, barely visible during a night like this. There was also a great amount of fog throughout the woods. The huge mountains in the East were barely visible from here. There was a small town nearby, just across the road. The small trees around the houses were being illuminated by the faint lights of the lanterns that were put outside. Everything was silent, for it was late at night. There was a sudden chill in the air, much colder than…He looked out, but there was nothing there; the road was clear. “Hmm! It was nothing. Probably a bunch of wolves,” he said to himself in his deep voice.

There was some scratching noise outside of his room, and he walked angrily to open the door. He looked out; all the lights were off. He switched them on and saw the black figure standing a few feet in front of him. He accidently switched off the light, and realized his mistake. He turned the lights back on. There was nothing there. “I must be seeing things!” he exclaimed. Connor heard a woman’s voice call out his name. “Connor, help me! Someone! Please! Help!” said a bloodcurdling voice. He walked further into the room and tried to keep his eyes open. Everything was where it was supposed to be. He checked the kitchen. Nothing. He checked the stairway. Nothing. He even went downstairs and into the living room. Nothing. After that, he went and checked the doors and windows. He made sure everything was sealed shut. “Hello? Who is it? Hello?” There was no answer. And as he walked to check the last window, he saw his reflection. But the thing was, there was the dark figure again. Connor quickly turned around and started sweating. His heart was beating like crazy. He calmed down and became more vigilant. He looked around and saw it again, but it disappeared.

adding more details about the struggle rainsford experiences as he swims to the shore

a) madame podtochina used witchcraft to make it disappear.