Think: Don’t tell me that it’s messy. Describe the objects in the room, and how they are placed, and let the reader infer that it is a “disaster.” What does it smell like? Consider using a creative simile or metaphor. Showing:

Ineed a hook for a persuasive essay on vaccinating your kids and why you should

Read this excerpt from we’ve got a job: the 1963 children’s march. though connor was commissioner of public safety, blacks knew that it wasn't their health and safety he intended to protect. and he certainly didn't put out their fires. between the late 1940s and early 1960s, more than fifty black homes and churches in birmingham were bombed. one neighborhood was hit so often, it was called "dynamite hill." no one was ever prosecuted, even when the police could identify the bombers. what is the tone of the excerpt? inquisitive sentimental apologetic scornful

Project yellow light is holding a contest to get ideas for a texting-while-driving prevention campaign. nhat would be the best to include to make an ethical appeal to the audience? an excerpt from an interview with a new teen driver statistics about how many people text and drive a clip from an interview with a highway patrol officer information about how to set up a phone to block texts