How should Jordy share his suggestions for revising the story?Write down his suggestions and share them privately with Gloria. Hold his thoughts until the group is ready to discuss how to improve the story. Start the conversation with a suggestion for changing the story. Keep his ideas to himself--it’s a bad idea to criticize others’ work.

this is me

explanation:

recent news about two years ago indicates that a polish forestry student by chance unearthed at a depth of about 40cm (16 inches), during digging in a damp polish forest he found a 13-page manuscript into a thermos flask.

greek jew marcel nadjari was a aischwitz slave who witnessed how the nazi's built big death chambers and crematoriums and told how he was forced to escort fellow jews to the gas chambers. he accounts on this manuscript how the nazi's disguised this chambers to look like showers. also, he describes this place as a process of extermination from the chambers to the trains arriving to take the bodies.

a, a knight

ur answer is in the it