Revise and edit the argumentative research essay you wrote in Lesson 2, based on feedback from your peers and from your instructor. Your revised essay should show that you paid special attention to the feedback you've received and that you've made a major effort to improve the assignment. Your essay should also be as free as possible of sentence-level issues such as typos and confusing wording. Your assignment should include the following elements:

A claim, supporting reasons, and evidence from at least five sources

An introduction paragraph, body paragraphs, and a conclusion paragraph

A counterclaim, followed by a response that supports your argument

Transitions to show how the claim, reasons, evidence, and counterclaim are related

Read the rough draft of a student's conclusion to anargumentative editorial.(1) year-round schooling would student achievement.(2) not so much information would have to be crammed intonine months. (3) furthermore, the elimination of long breaks,particularly summer break, would significantly reduce"learning loss" and the additional time wasted at thebeginning of each academic year to reteach previouslylearned material. (4) it is clear that year-round schooling students learn and retain more. (5) the united staleis not the only country to experiment with a year-roundschool schedule. (6) although many still claim that evidenceabout year-round school and its link to higher achievement isinconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and seethat students in these schools consistently score higher oncertain assessments than students who attend schools withtraditional nine-month calendars. (7) it is about time that wereplaced our outdated and inefficient school calendars.which best revises sentence 6 to create a more appropriate and respectful tone