Please help! 1. Opening sentence: Grab your audience with a hook.
2. This sentence states your thesis or claim: what are you going to prove in this paragraph.
3. Introduce the passage from the book/play that you are going to quote. (for example: In Act 1, Scene 3, we meet Macbeth when he has just returned from battle)
4. Write the quote and the page number. (for example: The first witch says, “.”) (Shakespeare, page 3)
5. Say in your own words what is being said in the quote and why it is important.
6. This is your concluding sentence. Refer back to the claim. What part of your evidence (the quote) proves that your idea is correct?

When i was young enough to still spend a long time buttoning my shoes in the morning, i'd listen toward the hall: daddy upstairs was shaving, in the bathroom, and mother downstairs was frying the bacon. they would begin whispering back and forth to each other up and down the stairwell. my father would whistle his phrase, my mother would try to whistle, then hum hers backi drew my buttonhook in and out and listened to it -know it was "the merry widow." the difference was, their song almost floated with laughter. how different from the record, which growled from the beginning, as if the victrola were only slowly being wound up. they kept it running between them, up and down the stairs where i was now just about ready to run clattering down and show them my shoes. what is the effect of the parallelism used in the above excerpt? it establishes the rhythm of a duet to echo the song. it expresses the same ideas. it mirrors opposite ideas. it is a paradox.