Fix the paragraph In the cabinet Janet found an old book its cover was dusty, but she could see that it was made of leather she blew off the dust and when the air cleared she could barely make out the title it was a diary she began to wonder how it got there her family had just moved into the old house, and they had almost finished cleaning it out how the cabinet down in the cellar had been overlooked was a mystery to her

In the cabinet, Jane found an old book. Its cover was dusty, but she could see that it was made of leather. She blew off the dust, and when the air cleared, she could barely make out the title. It was a diary. She began to wonder how it got there. Her family had just moved into the old house, and they had almost finished cleaning out. The cabinet down in the cellar had been overlooked and was truly a mystery to her.

in my opinion i think it was not excessive at all. the maids turned against the queen in his absence, how could he ever trust them again? if he let them go they would surely spread the news of the suitor's deaths, which is much too risky. as for the suitors, they were selfish, rude, and greedy. the god's had apparently marked them for death, meaning odysseus made their death come faster.