100 points ! In a well-developed paragraph of four to six sentences, compare or contrast the structure of a dramatic play (as in Romeo and Juliet) with the structure of a poem (as in William Wordsworth's "I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud"). Explain the benefits and impact of each structure. Use proper spelling and grammar.

In a well-developed paragraph of four to six sentences, compare or contrast the structure of a dramatic play (as in Romeo and Juliet) with the structure of a poem (as in William Wordsworth's "I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud"). Explain the benefits and impact of each structure. Use proper spelling and grammar.

Explanation:

faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.

the mood is annoyed. they wish sandy was there do to the job right and since they dont like they way it came out now they are annoyed.