I need help writing an essay. I DO NOT want you to write it for me, I just need someone to bounce ideas on. I am applying for college, and I am choosing to write about discrimination. I have a hook, but I have hit a wall...Here is how it goes (so far) 7.647 billion people in the world. 579 in North America. 328 million in the United States. 118 million on the East coast. Of these people, only one of them is me; only one of them is you.

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