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the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

government played the key role in promoting industrialization in russia while individual businesses played a larger role in great britain. or for apex a

he thought hans was leaving

at least thats what i think it is

sorry if wrong