Help on my poem at least 18 lines, two smiles, two metaphors, two lines of alliteration, two lines of repetition, one line of personification, many lines of imagery

See explanation for answer.

Explanation:

Metaphors:

Your eyes are as brighter than the light

Your hair is as dark as the night

Smilies:

You’re a rose yet I’m the thorns

You’re a blue sky but I’m the storm

Repetition:

I might never meet someone like you again

Guess that’s my fault, I’ll explain things then

Someone like you again

Alliteration:

Please give poor girls like me protection

Pacing in the corner with no direction  

Personification:

As raindrops danced down my windshield

Guess I messed up again, not surprised then

Side Notes:

Yes, this is my original work. I'm sorry that it's not 18 lines long and the alliteration should probably be re-configured. Also, if you are a guy you definitely will need to change some of the lines and the pronouns used.

I hope I helped!

Have a lovely day!

consonance, it has the repetition of the consonants in stressed syllables with different vowel sounds.

in the short story the slip-over sweater by jesse stuart, the main character and narrator shan is friends with grace, an intelligent girl he has known since childhood and with whom he used to be in love.

at the beginning of the story, shan believes he’s no longer in love with grace, but loves jo-anne instead. in order to buy a slip-over sweater and have jo-anne wear it so that the other students would know she loved him too, shan takes a loan at the bank.

while jo-anne is wearing shan’s sweater, his friend grace starts to wear another popular boy’s one, roy’s sweater. because of that, the other students begin to pay attention to grace and compliment her perseverance and effort. they admire her for walking 5 miles to school every day, despite the weather, and still getting the best grades. shan, who knows all of that for a fact, says, as the narrator, ‘and i knew she had the durability and the toughness of a storm-battered mountain oak.’ he compares his friend’s strength – not only physical, but also of character – to an oak tree, whose wood is known for being sturdy.

as the story goes on, shan changes his behavior out of concern for the debt he has to pay at the bank. his new girlfriend jo-anne never asks him what is wrong nor offers any sort of . instead, she breaks up with shan for not being as fun as she thought he was supposed to be. grace, however, not only asks about shan’s problem, but him make the money he needs. shan can’t but notice how different the girls are and what a wonderful person grace is.   even though he used to find jo-anne prettier at the beginning of the story, he now says, ‘grace was as beautiful as our mountain was in april, prettier than a blossom of wild phlox or a mountain daisy.’ his comparing grace to a mountain or something that exists on a mountain (such as a mountain oak or daisy) certainly has important meaning since shan loves the mountain and everything about it and he knows the mountain thoroughly. shan also loves and knows grace as completely as he does the mountain.