SECTION 8 - MAKING THE PRONOUN REFER TO THE RIGHT WORD AND GETTING RID OF MISPLACED OR DANGLING MODIFIERS
In the spaces provided, rewrite the following sentences in order to make them clear.
30. Joe told his father he wošld have to take the car to the garage.
31. His motorcycle hit a parked car, but it wasn't damaged.
32.
She was going to dinner with a man who owned a Pinto named Harold,

Match each term to its definition. the ideas that show a speaker's point of view or beliefs about a topic facts, statistics, examples, and expert opinions that support a point of view or belief evidence arrowright claims arrowright

Imagine if going to work every day meant your life thats the reality that meat packers in this county face with some of the highest rates of injury and death of any profession i myself worked at such a facility for two years and can resport on the unsafe conditions firsthand

Read the following conclusion for an essay that claims that extreme sports should be more highly regulated because they are too dangerous: whether it is a high level of physical exertion, or extra doses of the "fear factor," it is common for extreme athletes to beat at the door of fate. it is these people who tempt their own mortality, while curious onlookers wait anxiously for the outcome, who must be protected from themselves. which statement provides the most accurate evaluation of the paragraph? a. the closing statement is unsatisfying b. the passage introduces new evidence. c. the thesis is not restated. d. the style is informal and inconsistent.