In no fewer than three sentences, critique following paragraph. Explain
Make sure you include a hook, supporting evidence, and
where it could be improved. Then, in your own words, rewrite the paragraph to make its writing stronger.
topic sentence. Use correct spelling and grammar.
Playing in the snow is one my happiest childhood memories.
so many people find the wintertime annoying.
The winter offers more than a
time for kids to have fun.
More people should step outside to enjoy the snow. I am glad
There are many things to do in the snow. It is unfortunate that
grew up where it snows. (5 points)