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What is the problem with the following sentence: cameron, who has an extreme and unreasonable suspicion of other people and their motives, suffers from paranoia which is a psychological disorder characterized by delusions of persecution or grandeur, was absolutely sure that someone was following him even though he was absolutely alone and hadn't seen a car for miles and miles.

Make sure the topic of your persuasive essay is not a.something someone else is writing about b.a fact c.something you have written about before

The point of view that london uses in white fang the reader understand the perspectives