Finally, if the salaries of women are raised, havoc will ensue. Companies cannot take on that extra burden, and many will fold. Or, companies will be forced to enact equality another way; instead of raising women’s salaries, they will decrease men’s. What makes the reasoning in this excerpt fallacious?

The excerpt uses oversimplification by implying change would be instantaneous and have one of two negative effects.

The excerpt evades the real issue by theorizing how equal pay would affect the economy.

The excerpt attacks women personally by implying that women would not mind an increase in their salary at men's expense.

The excerpt is told from a male perspective, which calls into question its credibility.

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the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

from the political point of view it could be said that the candidate   is an effective speaker because she takes a strong position on the issue. it is an open discussion but probably she is making a presentation and can choose which subjects she wants to address. she is very likely to attain her aim which is to convince voters to accept her proposal.