I got 11 out of 15, and I feel like it's not accurate so I'm paying to get it re-marked, do you think I deserved to lose 4 points? Check the picture,
the “grading criteria “:

Proper Essay Division : 3

Relevance: 2

Proper Idea Development:3

Grammar: 3

Spelling: 1

Punctuation:2

Transition words & Phrases:1

Total :15

I know I had two mistakes (your instead of you're, and on the other hands instead of on the other hand) but those are spelling mistakes and spelling has 1 point only so I feel like losing half a point is fair maybe?

Ireally need on this i will name you brainliest if you . mr. frost's book reveals a disease which is eating into the vitals of our new england life, at least in its rural communities. what is there in the hard, vigorous climate of these states which plants the seeds of degeneration? is the violence and ugliness of their religious belief the cause of these twisted and tortured lives? have the sane, full-blooded men all been drafted away to the cities, or the west, leaving behind only feeble remainders of a once fine stock? mr. frost's is not the kindly new england of whittier, nor the humorous and sensible one of lowell; it is a latter-day new england, where a civilization is decaying to give place to another and very different one. based on what you have read in “a servant to servants,” do you agree with lowell’s analysis? cite evidence and examples from the poem to support your response of at least 150 words.

11. why is it important to use positive language in business messages?

Which three events took place when lincoln lived at knob creek farm?