Select the correct answer from each drop-down menu. The writer is trying to improve cohesion in the paragraph below. Which words or phrases would best connect the ideas presented?
Some advocates of mandatory uniforms believe uniforms will curb bullying.
✓ research conducted by the University of
Texas notes that mandatory uniforms does not significantly impact bullying amongst students.
the research went on
to note that when schools promote uniforms as a deterrent to bullying it harms students emotionally by saying being an individual
attracts unwanted attention.
. if mandatory uniform advocates were really concerned about the well being of
students, they should be tackling uniform retailors and their outrageous prices that create larger financial burdens for families.
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Some advocates of mandatory uniforms belleve uniforms will curb bullying. However, research conducted by the University of Texas notes that mandatory uniforms does not significantly impact bullying amongst students. On the other hand, the research went on to note that when schools promote uniforms as a deterrent to bullying it harms students emotionally by saying being an individual attracts unwanted attention. Therefore, if mandatory uniform advocates were really concerned about the well being of students, they should be tackling uniform retailors and their outrageous prices that create larger financial burdens for familles.​

Explanation:

The words in bold, presented in the text above, can be used by the writer if he wants to connect ideas precisely and maintain the cohesion, fluidity and coherence of the text. The fluidity of the text is very important for the reader to understand what is being presented by the author while reading the text. For this reason, it is important that appropriate words are used to connect the ideas in the text in a coherent way, allowing this fluidity to happen.