2. You recently went on a trekking trip from Haridwar to the Pindari Glacier. Look at the map and the information given below and write a letter to your friend telling him/her about your experience. Do not
exceed 100 words.
Day 1: Haridwar - uphill to Loharkhet - tiring first 5 km-enjoyed - trail eased 1 km before Dhakuri
Day 2: 4 km - meandering trail - teashop
Day 3: Khati - Diwali - Phurkiya - a tough journey
Day 4: Pindari and back

a rough draft essay is the final form of an essay after it has been edited and polished.

c.

during one-on-one conversations

this is correct

the best sentence that shows the best placement for the modifier "on the ice" is the one which contains it in the end of the sentence or in its beggining followed by a comma, that indicates it works as adverbial, dislocated in the sentence.

the girl promptly slid on her rollers on the ice.

on the ice, the girl promptly slid on her rollers.

i would say that it is a bad thesis because it doesn't explain what the health risks are. it seems to be a very vague thesis statement. thesis statements need to set up for the entire essay. it needs to give the reasons why people need to stop drinking diet soda.   so, i would say that it is a bad thesis.

hope this