When you finish writing your draft, review it and discuss how the information you read in the lesson helped you improve your research paper. For example, in your draft you may have included different types of primary and secondary evidence to support your claim. Do you think that you’ve incorporated a sufficient amount of evidence? Did you cite your sources correctly using MLA style? plz try to hurry please and thank you

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  plan: i will begin with a quotation about the importance of unity in a community. then, i will state my claim that an activity will unite our school by creating a shared vision, purpose, and direction. in the body, i will use three main points that describe the different avenues the students can take: through a variety of clubs, through a special event, or through an awareness week. i will provide evidence about other towns that have unity activities and the kinds of events that they include. pictures will illustrate my three main points in action. for the ending, i will restate the main idea in a new way and pose a question to keep the audience thinking. 

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