2 TIME REMARANG
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Read this excerpt from "What I Hope to Leave
Behind."
Why would paraphrasing be an effective way to
communicate this excerpt to an audience?
O You could quickly summarize the main points for an
audience who may not know about Eleanor
Roosevelt.
As I see it we can have no new deal until great groups
of people, particularly the women, are willing to have a
revolution in thought; are willing to look ahead,
completely unconscious of losing the house on Fifth
Avenue as long as somewhere they have a place to live
which they themselves may gradually make into a
home, are willing to give up constant competition for a
little more material welfare and cooperate in everything
which will make all those around them acquire a little
more freedom and graciousness in life.
O You could use the names of contemporary women
to illustrate how Eleanor Roosevelt's words apply
today.
O You could keep much of the original language while
updating some of the older references.
O You could rearrange the sequence of information so
that it would be easier for your audience to
understand.
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