01: Read the excerpt from a report.
Which revision improves the precision of the text?
O In sentence 1, change "address" to "impact."
O In sentence 2, change 'self-contained" to "one-C
kind.
(1) Cleaning up the existing garbage in the ocean
would begin to address the issue of climate change. (2)
A company called the Ocean Cleanup Project has
successfully developed a self-contained system that
collects ocean garbage. (3) It uses the natural forces of
the ocean to dump floating plastic. (4) The system
consists of a thing, which holds a ten-foot screen below
and catches the waste. (5) It would be awesome to
have a bunch of these systems removing garbage
In sentence 3, change ocean" to sea."
O In sentence 4, change thing" to "barrier."