Rewrite this paragraph by adding the following three transitional elements: however, likewise, and as a result. Make sure that your transitions help clarify the paragraph but do not alter its
meaning
Passage
We should organize a student-run organic garden on our school grounds. Organic food is
expensive, but one school in our region, Dickinson Middle School, was able to add an
organic vegetable option to every meal while raising their food cost by only 1 percent.
Nearby Browning Junior High did so with only a 2 percent increase. Students were healthier, and the administrators didn’t have to fret about the budget. The truth is that no nearby school that’s tried such a program has ended up with any food surplus. Let’s start a student-run organic garden today.

Read the rough-draft paragraph. exercising daily is one of the best ways to the body fight fatigue, illness, stress, and weight gain. whether taking a bike ride, enjoying a walk, or going for a swim, the type of activity is not as important as exercising consistently. often, people begin the new year with the resolution of exercising, but within a few months that commitment is quickly forgotten. the key is to choose something that is accessible, enjoyable, and affordable. exercising just thirty minutes a day not only strengthens the heart and lungs, but it also to boost one’s energy. another way to feel more energized is to eat a balanced diet. since no single food item can supply the body with everything it needs, it is important to eat a variety of foods. so to maintain a long, happy life, get out there and get moving, and enjoy a wide range of healthy meals. which statement best describes the mistake the writer makes in this paragraph?