U have discovered a new planet write about what u see there​

If one writes logically, he will prove his point. is this sentence correct or contains an unwarranted shift in person?

Samuel johnson believed that literature should appeal mainly to the scholar, to him the common man, to teach him the common man, to teach and him the king and the parliament

The bus driver who, only works weekdays, always waits for me when i'm running latecorrect the comma sandwich