If you were to make a version of yourself, how would you do it? Would you retain most of your original self or put some twist to it? Explain your answer in 5 sentences​

If I were to make an idealized version of myself I would keep some of my original qualities. I would keep my personality mostly. I would want to change my behaviors. I would stop myself from procrasinating on everything, and would make myself actually know what I was doing during school. And just for funzies I would give myself an extremely high metabolism.. just so I could eat whatever I want.

1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

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i will try let me see what they are first