Write 2 comments about good sides of thegrammer used in the paragraph. explain your answer Find five mistakes and explain how they should be corrected

Each of the five mistakes and 2 comments must be 20-50 words long , focus on the following types of grammar mistakes : fragments, run-ons, misplaced modifiers ,subject verb agreement, use of clauses , consistency of pronouns , parallelism

when alex falls for the charming new boy at school, cole -- a handsome, funny, sports star who adores her - she can't believe she's finally found her soul who truly loves and understands her.  

at first, alex is blissfully happy. sure, cole seems a little jealous of her relationship with her close friend zack, but what guy would want his girlfriend spending all her time with another boy? as the months pass, though, alex can no longer ignore cole's small put-downs, pinches, or increasingly violent threats.  

as alex struggles to come to terms with the sweet boyfriend she fell in love with and the boyfriend whose "love" she no longer recognizes, she is forced to choose -- between her "true love" and herself.

explanation:

because she needs money

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