Which statement best evaluates the effect of adding sensory language in the second version of the passage?
Passage 1:
"Yay! I hide first." Jaxon yelled and turned to leave. I started counting
but kept my eyes open to see where he was going. I could see his head
sticking out from behind the couch, and then he pulled it back.
Passage 2:
"Yay! I hide first," Jaxon squealed and clapped his hands, and then he
took off running through the house. I started counting slowly and
loudly, but peeked so I could keep my eyes on his whereabouts. His
blond head bobbled behind the couch and then disappeared.
A. It makes the passage more hopeful because it shows Jaxon's
excitement for the game.
B. It makes the passage more confusing because it does not include
details about the setting of the house.
C. It makes the passage more stressful because the reader realizes
that the characters are in danger
D. It makes the passage more realistic because the reader can sed
and hear the characters actions.