Which of these comments would be the MOST helpful in a peer review? “This is a great description. But you need to add details.”

“This is a great description--it gives enough details that I can imagine the way each object looks and feels.”

“I like the transitional tags."

“This is a great description because it includes a lot of details and interesting words.”

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motion can be transfered from one object to another by having an objetct in motion push or hit it

the speaker versus the boy.

sentence lenght varies according to word choice.you select which word to use and that will require to use other expressions that collocate with the word chosen.sentence length will vary   according to the choice of words you make to express your ideas.