Una has written this passage. What is the best suggestion for how she should spend her time proofreading this draft?
Weary to my core, and shuffling upstairs from my parents' basement. I
tried not to think. Almost forty, and living with my parents while my
husband tried to find a job in this post-crash economy. More than that was
awful, though. My old, frayed pajamas; my inability to afford new ones; and
the fact the pancakes I was smelling were ones my mom had made me.
And I'm thirty-nine years old, I thought. An age when I'm supposed to be
providing for myself.

alright no problem, cool

figurative language is a resource that fiction writers use to make better descriptions of what they want to write about or express. they can improve their stories, as they can elaborate more vivid and colorful sentences. this way, the reader will be able to have more detailed images in his/her mind.

places, objects, people and even feelings or emotions can be described with a lot of detail to metaphors, similes and personifications. making different kinds of comparisons to make a description more specific, as well as assigning human qualities to non-human objects (and vice-versa) can be very useful for science fiction writers.  

on the other hand, alliterations allow writers to elaborate more entertaining and creative sentences. it consists in using a sequence of words that start with the same consonant letter. they can be used to emphasize something important the writer wants to express, or just as a fun literary device.