Which revision would most improve this excerpt from a narrative? That was it – the final straw! Daisy would have to kick her brother out
of the club. Jack was two years younger than Daisy, and he looked up
to his big sister. Ms. Carter had hired them to find her missing cat.
Now what would Daisy do? They had started a club for kids who
wanted to solve mysteries. Jack had found a stray cat (one that was
not Ms. Carter's) and had tried to paint it white to trick everyone.

Will give out brainliest and maximum points to ! ! you may write a poem that explains the difference between a market economy and a command economy. your poem must include: -six terms from chapter 2* -at least one of the primary goals of each of the economic systems -highlights of at least two benefits and two drawbacks of each economic system. *key terms listed in attachment

Men sample of a metaphor? o a she was as busy as a bee. o b, his room was like a prison. o c. she has a heart of stone, d. she is an uncaring person.

The major was a little man with upturned mustaches. he had been in the war in libya and wore two wound-stripes. he said that if the thing went well he would see that i was decorated. i said i hoped it would go well but that he was too kind. i asked him if there was a big dugout where the drivers could stay and he sent a soldier to show me. i went with him and found the dugout, which was very good. the drivers were with it and i left them there. what effect does hemingway’s limited use of adjectives have? it slows down the narration by interrupting the action. it makes the few descriptive words he does use more vivid and forceful. it makes the narrator seem powerless and insincere. it prevents the readers from filling in the details with their own experiences.