I need y’all’s honest opinion bc i wrote this and i need some opinions on it Sometimes i wonder into the beyond
If there truly is a place where i belong

I’m not wanted anywhere
It just seems as if people just don’t care

Looking through the stars
I think i won’t even belong at Mars

I want to fly away from all my problems and everyone
But too bad i am burned by the sun

Back at zero gravity i can’t help but float away
I just wish god listened to me pray

The pain gets too intense but i still hang on
This pain I trap inside because all feelings are gone

I really liked it! Writing is a good form of letting out emotions, and I hope whatever is happening in your life turns out alright. Never give up because one day everything will be okay, the sun will shine, you'll have great people around you the ones that stayed and came to you when you most needed them, a better life overall. Keep fighting <3

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- Eijiro <3

this is really good, and it's a good start to pour your emotions in peoms, tnx for sharing it , I am really touched

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the writer needs to avoid using abbreviations and check spelling before sharing.