“So, then it was, like, my turn to try the new machine thingy. It was, ummm, so sweet!” Identify the problem language in this statement and then rewrite the statement to correct the problem.

Problem words: like, ummm, and thingy

Explanation:

Rewrite it:

So then it was my turn to try the new machine. It was so sweet!

To re-put it you can say, "Then, it was my turn to try the new machine. It was so sweet!"

Explanation:

The original way they put it had to many commas

mine is hell,we all hate each other,we fight but me and my mom,dad,and siblings get along.

the right ones are in bold.

daintly refers to the fact she was reaching for what she ate, not necessarily what she is like.

greatest charm as in she possessed (=had) the greatest charm.

pleasant (her demeanor)

speaking (of her sensibility)

dead refers to the hypothetical mouse.

bleeding refers to the hypothetical mouse.