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English, 30.01.2020 03:00 nguyendavis17

Tejas decided to rewrite the sentence

the crowd yelled, and they jumped up when the buzzer went off.

as

when the buzzer sounded, the cheering fans leaped to their feet in excitement.

was tejas correct in making the revision?
a) no, because the new sentence is much too long.
b) yes, because the new sentence adds vivid language.
c) yes, because the new sentence is longer than the first.
d) no, because the new sentence is not as clear as the firs

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