Correct the following paragraph so that it uses the right words and includes appropriate apostrophes.

yesterday, my friends went to the cite of a world-famous puppy park with their dogs. theyre dogs tails were wagging so quickly they looked like helicopters! it was adorable. once they were their, the dogs got to run around and play while the people talked about there favorite animals. yesterday was a lot of fun for dog lovers.

is this right?
yesterday, my friends went to the site of a world-famous puppy park with their dog's. their dog's tail were wagging so quickly they looked like helicopter's! it was adorable. once they were there, the dogs got to run around and play while the people talked about their favorite animal's. yesterday was a lot of fun for dog lovers.

Yesterday, my friends went to the cite (replace with city) of a world-famous puppy park with their dogs. Theyre (Their) dogs' tails were wagging so quickly they looked like helicopters! It was adorable. Once they were their (there), the dogs got to run around and play while the people talked about there (their) favorite animals. Yesterday was a lot of fun for dog lovers.

Most of these errors are the wrong uses of "there" "they're" and "their". Their is possessive, there is pointing to where it is happening, and they're is "they are" describing what they are doing. When it is discussing multiple possessions, add a ' at the end. Found this helpful? Give it a Brainiest Award if so.

d makes alot of sense to me uwu

also, it is correct lol

explanation:

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themselves

an intensive pronoun is a pronoun that ends in self or selves, such as himself, herself, themselves, yourself, ourselves. since band members is a third person plural, the correct intensive pronoun would be themselves. if the band was talked about as a collective noun, itself would be the appropriate intensive pronoun. intensive pronouns are used to add emphasis to the noun it's modifying which is why it directly follows it.