Buddy rich has appeared in hollywood films

symphony of swing (1939)
ship ahoy (1942)
louis armstrong
how’s about it (1943)

what is wrong with the passage?

There are two errors present in the passage. One is grammatical in nature and the other is on lack of coordination in the information provided.

In the first case, grammatical, the error does lie in the lack of a colon, which is a grammatical mistake. Whenever there is going to be a list of information after an independent clause, which will expand on the information given by the clause, there must be a colon separating them, even if it is a list after a space.

In the second case, there is a mis-coordination of information because the list is supposed to expand on the movies in which Buddy Rich made his appearance, and the third one, Louis Armstrong, without a following date, means that they are talking about the real character, Louis Armstrong, instead of a a move by that name where Buddy Rich could have acted.

to leave the reader thinking and wandering on their own. without a resolution we are clueless to what happens next, and why it does. it may even cause suspension with the reader.

explanation:

the message which is being conveyed is that if a person does not have the qualified skills to be an writer then he should not and if he becomes then just leave it away..

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