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English, 02.02.2020 20:56 hector87

Hey guys, i need with this composition piece i have to write for english i have tried 3 times and keep getting it sent back to redo. i have no idea how to do this. could you guys me
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write a composition using one of the topics listed below. your composition needs to be three to five paragraphs long. it must contain an introduction, a body, and a conclusion

this is what i have so far. any advice will !

1. memorable day in your life.

one memorable day in my life, is giving birth to my first child. i remember is as it was just yesterday. i remember i had a doctor appointment to attend to about a rash on my arm i couldn’t get to go away. i had asked the doctor, “what this may be from? ” the doctor had taken blood work and i remember waiting for at least an hour until the results had come back. i had some scary news about having to go upstairs to be monitored because my liver levels were very high. the scary words i heard from the doctors were “its either you or your baby to survive if we don’t get your live count under control. off i go to get induced, four hours later baby and i were both safe and healthy. now being 26, i have two beautiful children and i wouldn’t change anything. i did find out when i was pregnant with my second child that i had the same illness as i did with my first. it turned out that my liver must work twice as much while i’m pregnant. i would go through it all again to have my wonderful children in my life.

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