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English, 17.10.2019 12:30 valeriegarcia12

Can you guys me and do a grammer check on this paragraph? and tell me anything else i might have left out?

the events that led to the hungergames was when the 12 districts rebelled against the capital. the purpose of the games were to remind the districts that they were at there mercy. i think that the events that led to the hungergames was the 12 districts rebelled because stated in the text, "then came the dark days, the uprising of the districts against the capital, twelve were defeated the thirteenth obliterated." i picked this quote because it shows that the districts were treated poorly(or were greedy) so they rebelled against the capital which led to the hunger games. the purpose of the hungergames were meant to serve is to remind the districts who was in charge ."taking the kids from our districts, forcing them to kill each other while we watch this is the capitals way of saying how totally we are at there mercy." enforces my fact.

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