Which phase of writing process involves checking the content to see if the essay is sufficiently detailed and adequately supports the thesis statement

the correct answer is:   [d]:

              →       " fond of fighting " .

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      best wishes!

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.