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English, 22.12.2019 01:31 amyeileen

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what is the best way to revise these sentences to make them more descriptive?

the contractor was restoring an old house that needed repairs. the house was built in colonial times.

a. the contractor was restoring an old house; a house built in colonial times with many details and history.
b. the contractor was restoring an old house that was falling down and badly in need of repairs. the house was built in colonial times.
c. the contractor was fixing the broken windows, replacing the leaky roof, and restoring the house built in colonial times to its original condition.
d. the contractor was repairing the old house, a house that dated back to colonial times and that needed repairs.

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