Read the passage. what is an effective way to rewrite the passage to avoid redundancy and wordiness? most people, regardless of their age, love the taste of sweet and sugary treats like chocolate, soda, and cookies. these foods are more often than not high in calories because of the sugar content. because of the high sugar content and high calories, such foods can cause people to gain a lot of weight. people of all ages love the taste of sweet and sugary treats like chocolate, soda, and cookies. these sweet and sugary foods are very high in sugar content, which is bad for your health. people love to eat sugary treats like chocolate, soda, and cookies. sugary treats like chocolate, soda, and cookies can lead to an increase in weight. people love sweet treats like chocolate, soda, and cookies. these foods are high in calories due to their sugar content, which can lead to an increase in weight. people love the taste of sweets like chocolate, soda, and cookies at all ages. people who do like these sweets are more likely to gain weight because they eat sweets. this is because these foods contain a lot of sugar and calories.

In the monkey king plotline of american born chinese, why is tze-yo-tzuh the antagonist?

My necktie rich and modest, but asserted by a simple pin-[they will say: "but how his arms and legs are thin! "]do i daredisturb the universe? in a minute there is timefor decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.which lines indicate that the speaker is concerned about what others think of him? my morning coat, my collar mounting firmly to the chin,my necktie rich and modest, but asserted by a simple pin-in a minute there is timefor decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.o with a bald spot in the middle of my hair[they will say: "how his hair is growing thin! "]and indeed there will be timeto wonder, "do i dare? " and, "do i dare? "

Select the contred text in the passage which sentence in this excerpt from john galsworthy's narrative essay "gone" reflects his view that there is no afterlife? an old woman and mrs. herd's sister were in the sitting-room, they showed us to the crazy, narrow stairway. though we lived distant but four hundred yards of a crows flight, we had never seen mrs. herd before, for that is the way of things in this land of minding one's own business a slight dark girlish-looking woman, almost quite refined away, and with those eyes of the dying, where the spirit is coming through, as it only does when it knows that al is over except just the passing. she lay in a double bed with clean white sheets. a white-washed room, so low that the ceiling almost touched our heads, some flowers in a bow, the small lattice window open. though it was hot in there, it was better far than the rooms of most families in towns, living on a wage of twice as much, for here was no sign of defeat in decency or cleanliness. in her face, as in poor herd's, was that same strange minging of resigned despair and almost eager appeal, so terrible to disappoint. yet, trying not to disappoint it, one felt guilty of treachery: what was the good, the kindness in making this poor bird flutter still with hope against the bars, when fast prison had so surely closed in round her? but what else could we do? we could not give her those glib assurances that naive souls make so easily to others concerning their after state. and the night was so beautiful, so utterly glamourously beautiful, with its star-flowers, and its silence and its trees clothed in moonlight. all was tranquil as a dream of sleep. but it was long before our hearts wandering with poor herd, would let us remember that she had slipped away into so beautiful a dream