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Which sentence in the passage should be revised for wordiness?

you have probably heard someone say that breakfast is the most important meal of the day. this statement is true. liz fair field reports in perfect health magazine, "breakfast your body to get going so that you have plenty of energy to start the day.” however, researchers warn against starting the day with foods that are high in calories, sugar, and fat. in other words, eating a piece of toast, either plain, with butter, or with peanut butter and with a side of fresh fruit, such as a banana, a plum, or an apple, for breakfast is better than eating doughnuts, candy, or ice cream. not eating a healthy breakfast can cause iron deficiency, which can cause a person to have a high body mass index (bmi) and lead to obesity.

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