Should i write this story? four young adults are living in a community where, everyday, a person is plucked out of their home and taken to a "better place". everyone has their suspicions that it isn't really a better place. rather, it is a worse place. one day, the people who pluck the people away reveal where the plucked are going. they are sent to a building, a huge building, where there are no maps and you rarely see another soul. even worse, you must find food, water, weapons, and other survival tools while being alert and aware that a tromper could find you at any time. trompers are varying in size, shape, and appearance. they could literally be anywhere.

Why does the author's description of the mercury boiler—"the mercury, when vaporized, going into a mercury turbine and then into a condenser, remaining hot enough to generate steam in a steam boiler"—intentionally incorporate such highly technical language? using technical language establishes the expertise of the writer and convey the complex nature of the process being described. using technical language allows the writer to subtly poke fun at those who seek to make basic processes seem overly complicated. using technical language encourages readers to develop deeper and more meaningful personal connections to the information. using technical language lets the writer make clear to readers that the article is intended for readers who are themselves experts on electricity.