Identify the correct sentence.
a. she had finished studying, so she felt free to have a good time.
b. she had finished studying, she felt free to have a good time.
c. she had finished studying she felt free to have a good time.
d. she finished studying and she felt free to have a good time.

Your answer would be A.

Explanation:

You should place a comma before so because it is followed by an independent clause. So is one of the seven coordinating conjunctions represented by the mnemonic FANBOYS (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so). when these coordinating conjunctions link two independent clauses, the conjunction is preceded by a comma. What is more, you could replace so with therefore in order to be sure whether to add a comma or not. If the sentence works with the replacement and the meaning is not altered, then so is a coordinating conjunction and should have a comma.

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.

oooh~ i love the salem witch trials.

sadly though, i cannot you if you don't post the paragraph. i'm confused on what to write!

if you would kindly post the paragraph though, i'm more than happy to you.

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