Any revising or editing needed in my poem? A Lass Called Genery
A Limerick by falling
There once was a lass who liked rain.
She said, "See the lovely vein!"
It was rather more,
But not very adore,
She couldn't say no to the maintain.

Can you correct this paragraph? a football player once had a dream. the dream was about the queen of england. she was on a boat and was fishing. when she tried to put a worm on the fishing hook, her necklace fell into the water. a train conductor named maxwell threw popcorn in the water. the fish ate the popcorn then gave the queen her necklace. the queen said, ” you all for me get my necklace back! ” “you are welcome said the conductor and all the fish.